FAN STORY ABOUT MACKENZIE COMING TO MY HOUSE

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   Lucy says:

   October 25, 2014 at 6:23 pm

   When I answered the door and she came in (uninvited) into my house and handed me a bag of Doritos.
   “Umm.. Mackenzie, why are you here?”I asked nervously.
   “Being friendly, I suppose.”She replied, looking at the paintings on the wall.
   Ok, weird or what?
   “Its just that… your being…well, kind.”
   “Oh, am I?”Mackenzie was in her own world now.
   I stared at her in shock
   She didn’t even react when I literally pushed her out of my house!
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   Suchadork2001 says:

   October 24, 2014 at 1:38 pm

   OMG, guess who just showed up at my front door…

   Still guessing? Too slow…it was MacKenzie!

   I heard the doorbell ring from the living room, and I was SHOCKED when I looked out my window and saw her over-hair-sprayed TWO FEET AWAY!

   Usually she only harasses me in school. Coming to my house to call me a dork would be a WHOLE new level of evil!

   At first I thought maybe she was trying to get me in trouble somehow. But then I thought, maybe not. You never know…she could be the world’s oldest girl scout and she was working on our street to sell cookies!

   I found out soon enough when she enters in.

   Mackenzie was acting all innocent to me so my family would know that she was nice. But when they were gone, she’s gone mad. “Mind telling me why your little sister kicked my leg?”. I notice that she’s still wearing her cast on her leg with heart stickers.

   I told her that your sister invited her. she’s gone even madder, when Brianna came in sick. She vomit at her butt side. Mackenzie screamed feeling disgusted. She runs out of my house and the town people laughed at her as she escapes.
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   Heather The Weird says:

   October 23, 2014 at 10:06 pm

   OMG, guess who just showed up at my front door…

   Still guessing? Too slow…it was MacKenzie!

   I heard the doorbell ring from the living room, and I was SHOCKED when I looked out my window and saw her over-hair-sprayed TWO FEET AWAY!

   Usually she only harasses me in school. Coming to my house to call me a dork would be a WHOLE new level of evil!

   At first I thought maybe she was trying to get me in trouble somehow. But then I thought, maybe not. You never know…she could be the world’s oldest girl scout and she was working on our street to sell cookies!

   I found out soon enough when she came to the door.

   My mom answered it, and she said, “Nikki! Come here! MacKenzie Hollister, the Hollister’s daughter, is here! Come say welcome!” I sighed, gritting my teeth.

   Calling MacKenzie mean was an underestimation. Shes a ferocious lion with hairspray and nail polish.

   I came up to the door, and she started to talk, but then Brianna rushed up to her and kicked her in the shin, saying, “Go away, Tooth Fairy! My tooths are mine!” OMG!!! I pushed her out of the way, whisper-yelling, “Brianna, shes calling truce!”

   MacKenzie screamed, “So your bratty sister was the one who kicked me last year?!” She glared at me with an icy stare.

   “I dont want to be here as much as you do,” she said as we sat down on the couch. “Just that, well, Brandon has asked me to do him a favor: Go ask Nikki what her number is, when shes available, blah blah blah..” I was having RCS.

   Brandon wants my number!? Hes asking when Im available!? OMG!!! :)!!!

   Then MacKenzie strutted to the door, muttering something about bratty Brianna. Then before she sayshayed away, she said, “Dont be so exited, Maxwell. Remember, Brandon was the one asking MOI!”

   I was so exited!!!

   Gotta go, Brianna is asking to go to to one of Penelope’s Concerts.

   |Hope you liked| 😀
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     Alex says:

     October 25, 2014 at 3:02 pm

     I liked that.
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   Artistgal199 says:

   October 22, 2014 at 5:02 pm

   OMG, guess who showed up at MY front door.

   Still guessing?? It was MACKENZIE!!

   The doorbell rang and I thought that she was going to BEAT ME UP!! :R

   Then what happened was that SHE said “What’s up DORK”?? And HOPELESSLY her BF JESSICA was there with her too.

   I wish that CHLOE AND ZOEY were there!! :R

   I just wanted to spray paint on Jessica’s hair. Mackenzie was STILL putting on her 100th layer of LIP GLOSS on. Seriously Mackenzie looks like a GRIZZLY BEAR!!

   Artsitgal199
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   patrastar says:

   October 22, 2014 at 3:39 pm

   if i think about it maybe you could write about Nikki got invited to Zoey or Chloe’s birthday party but Nikki couldn’t find a perfect birthday present
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   aditi says:

   October 22, 2014 at 6:19 am

   that would be a good starting for a new book!